Shadow13 wrote:Kalen De'lance Nightrose
Bleed: Weaken 6 (Affects: Stamina, Resisted by: Fortitude, DC 16)
Blinding strike: Affliction 6 (1st degree: Impaired, 2nd degree: Defenseless, Resisted by: Fortitude, DC 16; Limited Degree)
Teleport: Teleport 1 (60 feet in a move action, carrying 100 lbs.; Change Direction, Change Velocity, Increased Mass, Turnabout)
Leather Armor, Rapier and Dagger [Strength-based Strike 4, DC 21; Split: 2 targets]
Enemy: Bounty on my head and a few people who have grudges from beating them in the assasin bounty system.
Prejudice: In beta Kalen gathered a lot of bounties on other players. Sometimes he challenged them in a fair fight, sometimes he ganked them after they finished fight with a mob. In the end he tested and reported the pros and cons of assassin bounty system to the Dev team.
Dodge 7, Parry 7, Fortitude 5, Toughness 5/2, Will 4
1. I assume your Bleed, Blinding Strike, and Teleport are an array based of your power point costs at the bottom, but its better to make this visually clear. Tell me when a power is an alt effect.
Suggestion, for free you are able to Link Bleed and Blinding Strike to "Blade Damage" so when ever you use a dagger or sword weapon, you get both damage and affliction!
2. Please clearly state how much toughness your leather armor offers.
3. There was no Beta, however there was "World at War" which was the precursor game to the new game "New Beginnings" which is how all of the cast will know each other. You can have a reputation from there.
4. Final point, your fort and Will are under cap. I won't force you to change this, but I recommend that they total 12, otherwise affliction attacks will be dangerous for you.
Edit: Total nit pick but I think your character would be better called a "Swashbuckler" lol he looks very pirate-like which is really cool.