Kreuz Control: Nike, Soubrette, Blackout, TerraFirma, Sedna

[Dreaming Psion]

"Tremble, Mortals, before the awesome might of Gomdulla!"

Gomdulla, the Living Pharoah

PL: 10 (150)

abilities: (24)
STR 38 DEX 12 CON 24 INT 10 WIS 14 CHA 10

Neat monster. I think you forgot that Growth gives you a +1 bonus to Con per rank as well. I only count 12 pp in abilities taking the Growth into consideration. So that saves you 12 pp to spend on those powers that you mentioned in the description.

[Libra]

Actually, I know Stan and Jack never did drugs, but you've got to love the creations they made during that time period.

They were just high on life!

[Kreuzritter]

Holy Moley.

Captain Marvel

PL: 10 (150)

abilities: (20)
STR 32 DEX 16 CON 32 INT 10 WIS 20 CHA 14

Combat: (32)
+3 init, +8 ATK, +8 DEF (+ flat-footed)
+11 DMG ()

saves: (2)
TOU +11 FORT +10 REF +4 WILL +6

Skills (8/32)
diplomacy +8
knowledge: pop culture +4
notice +6
sense motive +6

feats (6)
all-out attack, assessment, beginner's luck, fearless, jack of all trades, power attack

Powers (85)
enhanced STR +16 (18)
enhanced con +16 (18)
enhanced wis +8 (8)
flight +5 (10)
immunity +9 (life support) (9)
impervious toughness +10 (12)
superstrength +6 (12)

drawback
normal identity (free action) (-3)

complications
enemy (black adam)
enemy (dr. sivana)
enemy (mr. mind)
honor
responsibility (student)
rivalry (superman)
secret identity (billy batson)

costs
abilities 20 + combat 32 + saves 2 + skills 8/32 + feats 6 + powers 85 - drawback 3 = 150 pts

at last, I give you Earth's mightiest mortal, able to hold his own against superman but not quite hang there for too long

despite builds by just about everybody else, I will NOT, nor ever, by adding the noted 'lightning strike' blast popularized in kingdom come. if ever that was a power feat that could only be brought about by extra effort, that's the textbook example

for reference purposes

[Kreuzritter]

"Holey Moley."

Captain Marvel

PL: 10 (150)

abilities: (26)
STR 36 DEX 16 CON 36 INT 12 WIS 14 CHA 16

Combat: (24)
+6 init, +7/6 ATK, +7 DEF (+1 dodge, +3 flat-footed)
+13 DMG (unarmed)

saves: (7)
TOU +13 FORT +13 REF +6 WILL +6

Skills (14/56)
bluff +6
diplomacy +6
investigate +4
knowledge: current events +6
knowledge: arcane +6
notice +8
profession: radio personality +6
search +8
sense motive +6

feats (16)
assessment, attack focus: melee, all-out attack, beginner's luck, diehard, dodge, fearless, improved intiative, interpose, jack of all trades, luck, move-by action, power attack, quick change, takedown attack, ultimate effort (strength checks)

Powers (66)
enhanced STR +12 (12)
enhanced CON +12 (12)
immunity +9 (life support) (9)
impervious TOU +13 (13)
immovable +2 (extra: unstoppable +1) (4)
Super-Strength 6 (feat: Dynamic, bracing, countering punch) (16)
- DAP: flight +7

drawback
normal identity (free action) (-3)

tradeoffs
+3 DMG/-3 ATK
+3 TOU/-3 DEF

Complications
Enemy (Dr. Sivana, Mr. Mind, Black Adam, Mr. Atom, Eclipso, Sabbac, Ibac, Captain Nazi)
honor
prejudice (minor [as Billy])
responsibility (student, Fawcett City [turf], Mary Marvel [sister], Camptain Marvel jr. [friend], Champion of Shazam)
rivalry (bulletman family, Black Adam Family)
secret (identity: billy Batson)

costs
abilities 26 + combat 24 + saves 7 + skills 14/56 + feats 14 + powers 64 - drawback 3 = 150 pts

at last, I give you Earth's mightiest mortal, able to hold his own against superman but not quite hang there for too long

despite builds by just about everybody else, I will NOT, nor ever, by adding the noted 'lightning strike' blast popularized in kingdom come. if ever that was a power feat that could only be brought about by extra effort, that's the textbook example

UPDATE: pretty much rewrit from scratch, this rendition of the big red cheese is now stronger, better balanced, and proof that the secret of good statting is to just keep at it.

and the 'after'

[Ares]

Very cool.

[Kreuzritter]

"I have touched you. Touched your heart with my darkness."

Black Velvet

PL: 10 (150)

abilities: (22)
STR 10 DEX 16 CON 16 INT 12 WIS 14 CHA 14

Combat: (32)
+7 init, +12/8 ATK, +8 DEF (+2 dodge, +4 shield, +4 flat-footed)
+0/12/8 DMG (unarmed/death touch/telekinesis)

saves: (10)
TOU +6/3 FORT +5 REF +6 WILL +6

Skills (16/64)
bluff +4
concentration +6
gather info +4
intimidate +12
knowledge: current events +4
knowledge: streetwise +8
notice +6
search +6
sense motive +8
stealth +6

feats (26)
accurate attack, assessment, atk focus: range 4, contacts, defensive attack, defensive roll 3, diehard, distract, dodge 2, fearsome prescence 4, improved initiative, move-by action, power attack, seize initiative, precise shot, startle, well-informed

Powers (44)
emotion control +5 (extras: continuous +1, area-burst +0, flaw: permanent -1, limit: hate/despair only -1) (5)
flight +2 (4)
mind reading +6 (extra: action +1, flaw: emotions only -1) (6)
Sheild +4 (4)
telekinesis +8 (extra: damaging +1) (25)
- AP: death touch +12 [12]

costs
abilities 22 + combat 32 + saves 10 + skills 16/64 + feats 26 + powers 44 = 150 pts

another menace of Astro City, Black Velvet's an antiheroine/borderline villain, a little bit too eager to mete out vengeance upon the human scum that walk the streets

[shazam]

Ah, is the math right on Captain Marvel? (For one thing; does Billy Batson really have STR 24?)

[Kreuzritter]

billy's a totally different characer in terms of stats, the build is strictly him as captain marvel

...crap, you're right.


edit: okay, he's fixed

[Kreuzritter]

Vampire Succubor

PL: 9 (135)

abilities: (31)
STR 26 DEX 24 CON 26 INT 7 WIS 10 CHA 10

Combat: (28)
+11 init, +10/6 ATK, +10/8 DEF (+2 dodge, +4 flat-footed)
+8 DMG (unarmed)

saves: (10)
TOU +8 FORT +11 REF +10 WILL +4

Skills (13/52)
climb +8
intimidate +12
notice +8
search +8
sense motive +4
stealth +6
survival +6

feats (21)
all-out attack, atk spec: unarmed 2, diehard, dodge 2, elusive target, evasion, fast overrun, fearsome prescence 3, improved initiative, move by action, power attack, startle, takedown attack, uncanny dodge (hearing)

Powers (43)
flight +3 (6)
immunity +3 (age, disease, poison) (3)
growth +4 (feat: innate, extra: continuous +1, flaw: permanent -1) (13)
regeneration +3 (res +3, extra: true res +1) (6)
supermovement 2 (wall-crawling 2) (4)
super-senses +7 (auditory blindsight, scent, track, ultrahearing) (7)
superstrength +2 (4)

drawbacks (-8)
mute (-4)
no hands (-4)

costs
abilities 33 + combat 28 + saves 10 + skills 13/52 + feats 21 + powers 43 - drawback 8 = 140 pts

from the TMNT movie, the succubor is basicly man-bat without the changing back to langstrom

[Kreuzritter]

Black Talon

PL: 8 (120)

abilities: (32)
STR 16 DEX 14 CON 16 INT 16 WIS 14 CHA 16

Combat: (24)
+6 init, +10/6 ATK, +10 DEF (+4 dodge, +3 flat-footed)
+3/6 DMG (unarmed/sword)

saves: (11)
TOU +6/3 FORT +6 REF +6 WILL +6

Skills (20/80)
bluff +8
diplomacy +8
intimidate +8
knowledge: arcane +8
knowledge: history +8
knowledge: streetwise +6
notice +6
perform: dance +8
profession: voodoo preist +6
search +6
sense motive +8

feats (19)
all-out attack, assessment, atk spec: sword 2, defensive roll 3, diehard, dodge 4, equipment, improved initiative, inspire 2, leadership, master plan, power attack, ritualist

Powers (13)
summon zombies +1 (feats: mental link, progression 6, sacrifice, extras: continuous +1, fanatical +1, horde +1) (13)

equipment
sword +3 (feats: mighty, imp. crit) [5]

costs
abilities 32 + combat 24 + saves 11 + skills 20/80 + feats 19 + powers 13 = 120 pts

Marvel's resident evil voodoo guy, black talon prefers to stack to the carribean, so as to avoid the above sacrilige

[Godfallen]

Black Talon

PL: 8 (120)

abilities: (32)
STR 16 DEX 14 CON 16 INT 16 WIS 14 CHA 16

Combat: (24)
+6 init, +10/6 ATK, +10 DEF (+4 dodge, +3 flat-footed)
+3/6 DMG (unarmed/sword)

saves: (11)
TOU +6/3 FORT +6 REF +6 WILL +6

Skills (20/80)
bluff +8
diplomacy +8
intimidate +8
knowledge: arcane +8
knowledge: history +8
knowledge: streetwise +6
notice +6
perform: dance +8
profession: voodoo preist +6
search +6
sense motive +8

feats (19)
all-out attack, assessment, atk spec: sword 2, defensive roll 3, diehard, dodge 4, equipment, improved initiative, inspire 2, leadership, master plan, power attack, ritualist

Powers (13)
summon zombies +1 (feats: mental link, progression 6, sacrifice, extras: continuous +1, fanatical +1, horde +1) (13)

equipment
sword +3 (feats: mighty, imp. crit) [5]

costs
abilities 32 + combat 24 + saves 11 + skills 20/80 + feats 19 + powers 13 = 120 pts

Marvel's resident evil voodoo guy, black talon prefers to stack to the carribean, so as to avoid the above sacrilige

I share deadpool's laughter

[Kreuzritter]

my 5000th post, so let's try somethinng i hope will be Awesome

[---]

From his throne high upon the Rock of Eternity, Captain Marvel, once known as Billy Batson, watched. He watched as the Khadorian and Amestrian Militaries slaughtered each other, unwitting pawns of a strange god. he watched the apocalyptic forces circling about manhatten, and how only the "ghostbusters" were paying attention. Powers and forces were at work, time and space themselves becoming mutable.

every day, Captain marvel thought of his late mentor, the wizard Shazam, and how he'd not gone made in the centuries of this existence, being capable of so much, yet virtually powerless at the same time.

Help me...

Everywhere he turned his newly acquired mystic senses, Captain Marvel coould see them. countless worlds that needed his help, yet because they were not beset by the supernatural, he was bared from helping. he technicly had his champions, but they were already in play. Freddy, his chosen successor as champion, was still undergoing his trials while trying to head off the Order of Merlin. Black adam, his predecessor, had reverted to the barbaric monster he'd been when they'd first met, falling far from his redemption. and worst of all, his own sister, Mary, while still in denial of the taint upon the power Black adam had given her, she was now at the mercy of the demon Eclipso, which was insidiously driving her mad.

Billy...

it was then he heard it, the voice. a barely audible plea, speaking the name he wanted to be known by. he respondedin kind

"Shazam?" he asked, the cavernous temple filled with thunder and lighning as he reverted to his true self, the young lad billy Batson.

"yes," said the ghost of the wizard as it shimmered into sight, ethereal and dreamlike. "help me."

it was then, standing at the heart of eternity, Billy felt it. the universe had turned, history changed dramaticly, but the change was unknown.

"what happened," billy asked the spirit, out of old habit if nothing else.

"istory changed," the spirit confirmed, "and it is why i can speak with you. in the old history, the spectre destroyed me utterly, and you were left to bear my burden, and the Rock of eternity was shattered, this set loose the seven deadly enemies."

billy nodded, casting an eye to the 7 statues at the other end of the hall, each the prison a different demon, each the embodiment of a deadly sin. he and his allies had made their recapture a top priority.

"in the new history, my death was not enough for them. as i perished, they captured my soul, dividing it aongst themselves, and used my power to hide a piece of themselves when you captured them. the Sins still walk billy, and I am prisoner to each of them...help me..."

and with that last plea, the spirit was gone.

in a word and another flash of thunder and lighting, Captain Marvel gave his reply

"I will."

Coming Soon

A Kreuz Control prodiuction

CAPTAIN MARVEL, AND THE SEARCH FOR SHAZAM!

[Servitor_2152]

Seven sins, each carrying a piece of the wizard's soul? Hmm . . . .

[Thorpacolypse]

Most excellent, good sir. I'm getting the popcorn ready...

[Kreuzritter]

no, these won't be Father's or Dante's children (although you do bring up a nice parallel), but rather i wanted to try out some of my builds and this had the potential for a good theme. some of these sins, incidently, are already statted

incidenty, if anybody can suggest 6 points to juggle around so captain marvel can get that 36 STR back, you'll be greatly appecriated