Nareik123: Isaac Clarke actually finished!

[Nareik123]

That will likely happen sometime soon. Just trying to re-animate the thread.

[Nareik123]

Through Fire and Forge

Part 1

It was Thursday, One o'clock in the morning. The light and warmth of the sun had vanished, leaving the cruelness of the cold to haunt the small village of Galesbury. This village was based in London, and was completely normal in every way. It had a Village Mayor, for example. The Mayors daughter, was cruel, and terrible to behold, although she was shockingly beautiful. It had a butcher, the man a sadistic butcher of anything that angered him, but could thankfully hold his temper in with humans.

It also held a homeless, poor girl. Her name was Anabelle Goodheart, and her surname reflected her nature. She had little, and what she did have aside from basic supplies was donated. Not to the mayor, because of his Succubus like daughter. Not to the Butcher, because of the chance he would flay her alive and use her carcass as the next days sale. No, it was donated to an abandoned house. She had so far left flowers, money, A DVD somebody thought was broken and had discarded and a watch. She had no idea why the house was there, or why she was attracted to it.

Anabelle shivered in the cold, for it was blistering cold, at least Five degrees. She hugged herself, fighting the useless battle to keep her body temperature in her body as she staggered through the city. Galesbury was dead at this time. Dead, aside from the random stray man or woman. Anabelle wept as she tried to find some spot to try and keep herself warm. All the public buildings were closed and locked. Nobody would let her into their house, as the town looked after themselves. She was blindly running, her eyes too full of her tears to see properly. She tripped on an unevenly placed pavement slab and feel, bruising her knees. Her overly long, dark, hair covered her face as more tears streamed out of her blue eyes. Her wasted from struggled to get up, not because of a huge lack of strength, but because she just wanted to die on the spot. Yet she couldn't find the will to commit suicide.

She felt a rough hand grab her and lift her. She looked up, hoping against hope, that somebody cared about her. Eye eyes stared straight into Isabella's, The cold daughter of the Mayor herself. Without breaking a stride, Isabella punched Anabelle in the face, before dropping her with a Kick to the stomach.
"You again?" She sneered, her rich clothing gleaming in the moonlight, her lustrous figure defined.
"Pathetic beggar. Why are you here again? Why don't I just take you to our Butcher? I get paid more, he gets exquisite meat and you die. Whats the issue?"
A tiny thought, just a small thought, crossed Anabelle's mind. The fiend was right, it was a perfect solution! However, that was tiny thought. And it was crushed by the thought that Isabella would take great pleasure from her victory.

Instead, she replied by throwing a kick at Isabella. Isabella screamed as the kick caught her in the torso. Probably more in distress from the dirt on her clothes than actual pain, Anabelle thought with anger. With a quick kick up, Annabelle righted herself and ran. She raced through the town, chased by Isabella, who was screaming in fanatical rage at the dirt on her clothes. Isabella might have a better physique and fitness, but Anabelle knew the village top to bottom, including various sewer entrances and exits. She quickly headed towards the sewer grate, when suddenly Isabella leapt forward and tackled her down. They were alone, in a back ally. Isabella clawed at her, ripping her rags apart.
"You thing! Those clothes cost me more than your life is worth!" Isabella hissed in wanton rage. She tore at Anabelles cheeks, at her torso.

Then, she drew out a Pistol.
"Daddy wants my to stay safe" Isabella giggled manically. She raised the pistol till it pointed at Anabelles head, and, as if even time mocked her, Anabelle could do nothing but watch as the trigger was pulled.

Suddenly, a flame red whip slapped the gun. Isabella screamed and jerked up, the bullet intended for Anabelles head simply flew wasted in the sky. Isabella screamed genuine fear, but Anabelle was feeling faint. Her vision was blurring rapidly, as she lost all strength. She felt strong hands gently lift her up and over her shoulder. The mans body warmth was exceptional!
"Be still, mortal. Your bleeding to death" A deep, harsh voice growled into her ear.

But there was little point, Anabelle was unconscious.

[Unknown Soldier]

I'm enjoying the items! Keep it up!

Also, more builds that include Miss Bianca

[Nareik123]

You asked for it...

Name: Bianca Beauchamp
Age: 31
Height: 5ft 2 inches
Weight: 115lbs
Eyes: Hazel

Stats:
Str: 10 (+2)
Dex: 12 (+1)
Con: 12 (+1)
Int: 12 (+1)
Wis: 10 (+0)
Cha: 16 (+3)
Cost: 12

BAB: 0
BDB: 1
Initiative: 1
Cost: 2

Saves:
Toughness: +1
Fortitude: +2 (+1 Con)
Reflex: +2 (+1 Dex)
Will: +1 (+0 Wis)
Cost: 3pp

Skills:
Bluff +4 (+7)
Diplomacy +4 (+7)
Drive +4 (+5)
Gather Information +4 (+7)
Knowledge: Current Events +4 (+5)
Knowledge: Popular Culture +4 (+5)
Notice +4
Profession: Model +4
Sense Motive +4
Cost: 9

Feats:
Attractive 3
Benefit: Wealth
Connected
Contacts
Cost: 6

Drawbacks
Stands out
Fame

Costs: Abilities (12) + Combat (2) + Saves (3) + Skills (9) + Feats (6) + Powers (00) - Drawbacks (2) = 30/30

Blame Unknown Soldier

There really isn't any use of Bianca, aside from a Human level seductress.

Support character only.

[Nareik123]

If you come out of the tombs today, your sure of a big surprise...
If you come out of the tombs today, you better have a lascannon in disguise...

Name: Necron Warrior
Age: --
Height: 6ft 9 inches
Weight: 215lbs
Eyes: N/A

Stats:
Str: 26 (+3)
Dex: 04 (-3)
Con: 20 (+5)
Int: 10 (+0)
Wis: 10 (+0)
Cha: 08 (-1)
Cost: 34

BAB: 10
BDB: 6
Initiative: -1
Cost: 32

Saves:
Toughness: +10
Fortitude: N/A
Reflex: -3 (-3 Dex)
Will: +0 (+0 Wis)
Cost: 0pp

Skills:
Intimidate +12 (+11)
Notice +12
Cost: 6

Feats:
Accurate Attack
All out attack
Ambi Dexterity
Blind Fight
Critical Strike
Diehard
Eidetic Memory
Endurance
Fearless
Fearsome Presence
Move by action
Power attack
Startle

Cost: 13

Powers:

Regenerative skin (Regeneration 25: +5 speed of recovery for each condition) (25pp)
Hardened skin (Protection 5) (5pp)
Anatomic separation 4 (4pp)
Communication 8 (Feat: Only Necrons) (9pp)
Immovable 4 (4pp)
Immunity 62 (All fortitude and will checks, Underwater, Breathing) (62pp)

Device: Gauss Blaster 8 (Hard to lose) (32pp)
Blast 9 (Linked Disintegration 5) (Feat: Incurable) (39pp+1pp)
AP: Strike 5 (Feat: Mighty) (Feat: Incurable)

Total: 141pts

Costs: Abilities (34) + Combat (32) + Saves (0) + Skills (6) + Feats (13) + Powers (141) - Drawbacks (--) = 226/240

Your probably thinking WTF IMBA! Hey, its a Necron.

As you can probably see, the Humble warrior is something you don't mess about with. Its got rock hard stats, immune to everything Con and Will (So no messing about with Emotion Control) and Regenerates everything quickly!

Make matters worse, the flaming things gun is incurable! Meaning your Regeneration is useless!

Truly a monster

[Nareik123]

A female Naga suitable for this site found on Google?
Chances of that?

Name: Kali Halithorn
Age: 27
Height: 15ft 2 inches (From tip of tail to head)
Weight: 215lbs
Eyes: Blue

Stats:
Str: 10 (+0)
Dex: 18 (+4)
Con: 16 (+3)
Int: 18 (+4
Wis: 12 (+1)
Cha: 16 (+3)
Cost: 30

BAB: 5
BDB: 5
Initiative: +4
Cost: 20

Saves:
Toughness: +10
Fortitude: +5 (+5 con)
Reflex: +6 (+4 Dex)
Will: +6 (+1 Wis)
Cost: 7pp

Skills:
Bluff +12 (+15)
Concentration +12 (+13)
Diplomacy +12 (+15)
Gather Information +12 (+15)
Handle Animal +12 (+15)
Knowledge: Arcane +12 (+16)
Knowledge: Popular Culture +12 (+16)
Notice +12 (+13)
Perform: Dance +12 (+15)
Profession: Sorceress +12 (+13)
Search +12 (+16)
Sleight of hand +12 (+16)
Survival +12 (+13)
Swim +12 (+15)
Cost: 42

Feats:
Animal Empathy
Connected
Contacts
Defensive attack
Elusive Target
Endurance
Environmental Adaptation: Jungles
Evasion
Fascinate: Dance
Fast Overrun
Favourite Environment: Jungle
Luck 3
Ritualist

Cost: 15

Powers:

Magic 15: (Drawback: Needs to speak) (Drawback: Needs to be able to move) (28pp)
Base Power: Thorn Shot (Blast (Feat: Sedation) (Extra: Autofire) (25pp+5pp)
AP: Adaption 4
AP: Snake Talk (Animal Control 10) (Flaw: Limited to Reptiles)
AP: Vines (Environment Control 10: Hamper Movement) (Reduce movement ¼)
AP: Natures Kiss (Healing 10)
AP: Human Form (Morph 1, 1pp per rank) (Feat: Meta morph)

Growth 4 (Feat: Permanent) (16pp)

Protection 3 (3pp)
Super movement: Slithering (2pp)

Device 2: Armour of Nature (Hard to lose) (8pp)
Protection 2
Strike 2 (Feat: Mighty)
Shield 5

Total: 57pts

Costs: Abilities (30) + Combat (20) + Saves (7) + Skills (42) + Feats (15) + Powers (56) - Drawbacks (--) = 171/171

An experiment of a magic user.

I'm gonna need your opinion on this one. Namely, is the magic right? I have never used Magic before.

Would love to play with her in a game, if anybody is looking for one.

[Elfy]

As far as I can tell, her powers should total 46pp instead of the listed 41pp--I believe you forgot to charge 1pp for each of the 5 alternate powers on Magic.

If the listed height/weight are intended for her base Naga form, then they seem quiet a bit off to me (if her upper body is supposed to be that of a normal human-sized girl, that is). Head-to-toe, she should be around 15 feet long--otherwise she'd have a stubby lower body. Weight would be quiet a bit more to take the extra length into account.

Naga girls are groovy =)

[Ecalsneerg]

Unable to speak and move are not flaws on magic, they're uncommon, minor Power Loss drawbacks.

Also, post on Freedom City PbP more

[Elfy]

Unable to speak and move are not flaws on magic, they're uncommon, minor Power Loss drawbacks.

Yes, I forgot to mention that; I counted them as drawbacks when I was counting points though =)

[Nareik123]

Sorry. I use Flaws as a general term, forgetting the difference between Flaws and Drawbacks.

[Nareik123]

Guardsmen

Name: Guardsmen
Age: 20+ years
Height: Variable
Weight: Variable
Eyes: Variable

PL: 3

Stats:
Str: 14 (+2)
Dex: 14 (+2)
Con: 14 (+2)
Int: 12 (+1)
Wis: 10 (+0)
Cha: 10 (+0)
Cost: 14

BAB: 4
BDB: 4
Initiative: 2
Cost: 16

Saves:
Toughness: +2 (+7 Protection)
Fortitude: +2 (+1 Con)
Reflex: +1 (+1 Dex)
Will: +1 (+0 Wis)
Cost: 2

Skills:
Disguise 1 (+1)
Knowledge: Civics 1 (+1)
Knowledge: Religion (The Emperor) 1 (+1)
Profession: Soldier 1 (+1)
Cost: 4

Feats:
Accurate attack
Elusive target
Move by action
Cost: 3

Powers:
Device 3 [Lasgun] (Hard to lose)
Blast 5 (Extra: Autofire)

Device [Frag Grenades] (Easy to lose) (12pp)
Blast 6 (Feat: Progression 2) (Extra: Area (Burst))
(Flaw: Only use three times)

Flak Armour (Protection 5)
Cost: 29

Costs: Abilities (14) + Combat (16) + Saves (2) + Skills (4) + Feats (3) + Powers (29) - Drawbacks (00) = 68 (PL 5)

Designers notes

The Guardsmen are pathetic. Those who know about 40K know that an individual Guardsman can not match 90% of the other units in the game. However, they prevail through numbers. One lasgun is a joke, but due to the cheapness to manufacture and common numbers in the Imperium, it is easy to bring 100 to bear. This is also about the Elusive target, as a Guardsman is extremely hard to distinguish from 20 others wearing identical uniform. This also applies for disguise. The other skills come from the Imperial Infantrymans Uplifting Primar.

I updated the Guardsmen to make him at least better than the ones in the MnM book.

Lasgun is changed from Blast 3 to Blast 5

BAB and BDB has been upped to 4

Guardsmen now have frag grenades

Guardsmen now have Strength, Dexterity and Constitution 14, also they now possess Intelligence 12.

Flak armours been improved.

Guardsmen saves have been increased.

Hopefully this will make the Guardsmen pretty damn good compared to the modern day special forces.

[Nareik123]

We're the Guard
Only better

Name: Imperial Guard Storm troopers
Age: 30+
Height: ---
Weight: ---
Eyes: ---

Stats:
Str: 14 (+2)
Dex: 16 (+3)
Con: 16 (+3)
Int: 14 (+2)
Wis: 12 (+1)
Cha: 12 (+1)
Cost: 24

BAB: 5
BDB: 5
Initiative: +3
Cost: 20

Saves:
Toughness: +3 (+9)
Fortitude: +8 (+3 con)
Reflex: +5 (+3 Dex)
Will: +6 (+1 Wis)
Cost: 12pp

Skills:
Acrobatics +8 (+11)
Climb +8 (+10)
Concentration +8 (+9)
Disable Device +8 (+10)
Intimidate +8 (+9)
Knowledge: Civics +8 (+10)
Knowledge: Tactics +8 (+10)
Knowledge: Theology and Philosophy +8 (+10)
Medicine +4 (+5)
Notice +8 (+9)
Profession: Storm Trooper +8 (+9)
Search +8 (+10)
Cost: 27

Feats:
Accurate Attack
All out attack
Attack Specialization (Hellgun)
Connected
Contacts
Defensive Attack
Move by attack
Precise Shot
Cost: 8

Powers:
Device (Carapace armour and Helmet) Hard to Lose 3 (12pp)
Protection 6
Super sense: Darkvision
Communication 1 (Extra: Area) (Feat: Progression 5)

Device 6 (Hellgun) Easy to lose 6 (18pp)
Blast 6 (Autofire 2) (24+5pp)
AP: Blast 6 (Feat: Accurate)
AP: Blast 6 (Extra: Burst) (Feat: Progression 3)
AP: Concealment 2 (Normal Sight) (Feat: Close range) (Flaw: Partial)
AP: Strike 4 (Feat: Mighty)
AP: Blast 8
Enhanced feat: Ranged Pin (1pp)
Total: 30pts

Costs: Abilities (24) + Combat (20) + Saves (12) + Skills (27) + Feats (8) + Powers (30) - Drawbacks (--) = 120/120

[Nareik123]

Unfortunately, i'm running low on ideas....again.

Most of my concepts are Homebreew, and I dearly would like to add some more Marvel and DC characters to my Roll call thread. But i know nothing about any of them!

Any requests? Any advice?

[Nareik123]

City Infiltration

Sergeant Kale leaned back on his seat in the Valkyrie carrier, his helmet off to reveal the hardened face of the veteran, his cropped black hair, his face which was part bionic. He was suited in his bulky carapace armour, the armour which the God Emperor has issued him with through his divine servants, the Departmento Munitorium. The armour clad his torso, protecting from his toes to his neck with sufficient force to stop a lasbolt. He glanced around at the other men, and a woman, under his command. The wail of the engines made it hard to be heard, and so Kale used hand signals to his other troopers. Eight were to his left, only Corporal Juliana was to his right, being above the ranks of trooper. It was pretty obvious the Kale had feelings for Juliana, but nobody dared mention it to Kale's face. Kale smiled to Juliana, and she smiled back, before turning his face to look at his data slate. The briefing was on this slate, and Kale had gone over it at least twenty times, memorizing it.
"Sergeant, can we know the briefing?" smiled Juliana.
"One sec, i'm gonna vox everybody the information" Kale replied, reaching for his helmet, safely in a gene locked containter. Kale stood up and swiped his thumb through the gene key. He winced naturally as a needle took a measure of his blood, before the container swung open.
Kale grabbed his helmet and placed it over his head, locking the helmet into place and sealed it.
"Juliana, vox check" Kale ordered, toggling his vox onto squad channel.
"One lead, this is one-two" a voice crackled over his vox.
"Copy Juliana, this is one-lead" Kale replied.
"Vox systems in the green sir" Juliana reported.
"Good, one-lead out" Kale finished.
"Alright men, listen up" Kale yelled over the vox. His squad all ceased chatting and turned to face him.
"Squad! Role call!" Kale ordered.
"Trooper Nale, sir!" replied the most junior of his squad.
"Trooper Hyke, reporting for duty!" yelled the heavy weapons expert of his squad.
"Trooper Yung, here!" nodded a rank and file trooper.
"Flame specialist Gavail, with my torch" chuckled the flame trooper.
"Trooper Bael, as always!" grinned another trooper.
"Trooper Doon" growled the silent murdered that was Doon.
"By His will, trooper Lustridge sir!" replied the most Religious man in his squad.
"Trooper Strack, ready to knock my kill count up to one hundred" finished the Kill crazy man.

Kale nodded as he distributed Data slates to every one of his team.
"Listen up men! We have ourselves a war turning op here, so you damned well better pay attention" Kale informed.
"With respect sir, isn't every op we do war turning?" Bael asked.
"Then this should be easy to remember, so shut up and pay attention" Kale snapped. Bael leaned against his restraints, his helmet on so Kale couldn't see his reaction.
"As you all know, His holy Imperial Guard have had the fun job of trying to shift a cult. We all know that it is possible, but we're not the damned Death Korps of Kreig, and so we ain't throwing millions bodies into the mess and see which come out alive. Getting regiments into the cults capital is proving a damn sight lot harder then we imagined, as these fools sink to a new low and use daemons! And you all know, this is on the other side of the world" Kale informed.
"Sir, what are we doing half a world away from the main action?" Nale asked.
"Because the capital is the body, this place we're going to is the head" growled Doon.
"Trooper Doon is correct Nale. The capital is holding so damned well because it has a good resource supply from nine separate locations. We're heading for one of them. Another eight teams are heading to the other locations. We sabotage even one of them, it will help our troops invaluably. I mean, they must be sick of seeing a defiled Leman Russ by now, especially since the cults repair them!" Kale nodded.
"The supply depot is protected by many gun towers and Anti tank pieces, so we will be using the airfield out the back. Our load out is urban fighting, flamer and Hellguns. I want no grenades this time unless I give a direct order! There is little chance we can re-arm on frags, while there should be enough cells there for our Hellguns. Our objective is to either find the supplies storage and destroy it with all their equipment in it, or to destroy the method of transportation!" Kale finished. He looked around his squad.
"Any questions?" He asked.
"Sir, what manner of resistance are we expecting?" Yung asked.
"Cultists trooper. Poorly equipped and almost no training, but with morale soaring above ours. They will be hard to break, trust me on that" Kale replied. He looked around.
"Alright, we're coming up! Standby for rappel!" Kale ordered. Then suddenly, the whole craft shook violently.
"Emperor damn it! We got anti aircraft fire!" screamed the pilot suddenly.
"Damn it! Land! Land this bloody bird!" Kale screamed.
"Negative! We're going down hard!" screamed the pilot back. The whole aircraft was shaking violently.
"Squad, anti grave chutes!" roared Kale, slamming open a locker with ten standard issue Jump packs designed for Guard. He hastily belted his harness up as his squad followed suit.
Juliana slid open the door, howling wind was rushing in.
"For the Emperor! Charge!" Kale yelled as he leaped out of the Valkyrie.

[Nareik123]

Information Post

Roster

Sergeant Kale
Equipment: Thunder Hammer. Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Yung
Equipment: Chainsword, Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Hyke
Equipment: Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Doon
Equipment: Chainsword, Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Bael
Equipment: Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Flame specialist trooper Gavail
Equipment: Heavy Flamer, Hell pistol, Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Nale
Equipment: Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

Trooper Strack
Equipment: Chainsword, Hellgun, Hell pistol, Frag Grenades (10), Carapace armour.
Injuries: None

MIA/KIA:
Corporal Juliana (MIA)
Trooper Lustridge