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Postby Libra » Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:01 pm

Actually that would be my thought as well, I just needed a bit of a laugh since my type-ups didn't have many.

Your explanation is probably the truth but my story is probably the one Raven tells, especially when Alex is around. She inherited her father's love of pranks and taste for pulling the odd leg.

It's one of their best-kept secrets that they're the biggest practical jokers in the League.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:10 am

Thanks, I just think it's amusing to think of their relationship that way. Like two people who everyone thinks they'd be good together but, in fact, are too much alike.

In any case, much of this information may eventually make its way into supplements. It's also helped me develop the Halt Evil Doer! world that I've wanted to create over the years into something much more interesting and varied. Once HED! 1.5 is out, I'll begin working on some of the supplements inspired.

Though they'll have to take secondary status to my existing Savage Worlds supplements. I especially liked your portrayal of Android Man's relationship with his former friend. Bravo, very well done.

I look forward to your write-up of Force Ops.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:15 am

BTW, a short list of what exactly will be coming out from Phipps Studios (the webpage will be up in a couple of weeks) is this.

Winterweir: A Savage Worlds Dark Fantasy game ala Warhammer or the SOI&F game. Basically, fantasy written for adults rather than all-ages D&D. It's a setting book that has a novel that I hope to release to accompany it.

Has to be Done: A Savage Worlds Conspiracy Spy-Game. Join the Pyramid, the world's Illuminati-esque organization devoted to fighting aliens, monsters, terrorists, and secret societies devoted to world domination. Do you have what it takes to be a James Bond-esque spy? Or are you more like Chuck?

Black Hole: A Dark Space Opera game, set in the same universe as Has to be Done and Winterweir. The forces of the Eldrich Horrors exist just beyond Black Holes and the galaxy is divided amongst fascist and ineffectual Democratic powers. What side will you serve?
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Postby Libra » Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:39 am

It seems that I'll have to keep an eye on Phipps studios and my wallet at the ready in future! If you have forums I'll probably infest them too.

There will be no escape.8)

Thanks, I just think it's amusing to think of their relationship that way. Like two people who everyone thinks they'd be good together but, in fact, are too much alike.


I agree. However Alex has another pseudo-sibling relationship with an inhabitant of the World of Freedom and it's not so cordial - or psychologically healthy. . .

In any case, much of this information may eventually make its way into supplements. It's also helped me develop the Halt Evil Doer! world that I've wanted to create over the years into something much more interesting and varied. Once HED! 1.5 is out, I'll begin working on some of the supplements inspired.


I am pleased and proud to have contributed in any way Charles. You have been a most excellent fellow and astonishingly patient with my pestering you for. . .well, quite a while now. It's only fair I give something back, beyond compliments.

Though they'll have to take secondary status to my existing Savage Worlds supplements. I especially liked your portrayal of Android Man's relationship with his former friend. Bravo, very well done.


Thank you. They were so similar that they had to be related somehow, so I tried to take the Iron Age route and make it a terribly twisted sort of relationship.

I look forward to your write-up of Force Ops.


So am I! 8)

In all seriousness there's a reason I wanted to save a write-up of a team that should probably have been posted second - in strictly alphabetic order - till last.

The last thing I'll say on the topic is that the perceived relationship between FORCE-Ops and the Psychotic 7 needs to be addressed - even though the latter team only really came into existence after the death of FORCE-Ops.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:54 am

Libra wrote:I agree. However Alex has another pseudo-sibling relationship with an inhabitant of the World of Freedom and it's not so cordial - or psychologically healthy. . .


Interesting, Foreshadow?

Libra wrote:In all seriousness there's a reason I wanted to save a write-up of a team that should probably have been posted second - in strictly alphabetic order - till last.


Looking forward to your results.

FYI-

This thread helped inspire me to ditch the Foundation as written up before. The New Foundation for World Harmony is going to be explictly a Spy-Only Agency with the ditching of Paramilitary operations. I happen to like the Man from Uncle and the idea of a purely investigative and elimination group of super-agents works much better for the stories I want to tell.

Basically, the Foundation for World Harmony is the criminally underfunded group of super-operatives Cops and Spies that occasionally employs Super Hero Teams to clean up the many myriad disasters filling the world.
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Postby Libra » Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:22 am

Hmmm. Interesting, but I would suggest that the Foundation does have access to military units if necessary, but that they're on loan, rather than integral members.

I'd also suggest that the current state of affairs is a relatively recent development, based on the preferences of Dame Holmes.

Interesting, Foreshadow?


Well I still re-read the old HED! Story Hour thread regularly and I usually try to work in ideas from there in my write-ups.

I remember that the original incarnation of Black Wing II had a twin sister. . .

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Postby Charles Phipps » Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:58 am

Hero Profile 3#: Steel Commando III

Steven Shepherd is a man with some big shoes to fill. Not of General Venom or even the first Steel Commando, but of basically being the man that has to restore confidence in America and normal humans in their ability to fight back against the tides of darkness that face mankind. Steel Commando III's presence on the Patriots was part of America's deal to allow them to operate once more on United States soil, not that he needed such an ultimatum to get on the team, but as a way of reinforcing the message that the world wanted to send out. Specifically, "You too can be a superhero."

Steve sometimes regrets the public relations aspects of his job. Yes, he's the most prominent African American superhero in the world. Yes, he works directly for the United States government and was picked to be the America's Chosen Champion for the most unpopular administration in two decades (though President-Elect Barrack Obama has privately approached Steve and after sounding out each other for a while, the two came to an agreement that he would continue to serve his country in the same manner that he did under the Bush Administration). Honestly, Steve is only interested in serving his country in the best manner that he can.

Steve's history was fairly glamorous even before he became the Steel Commando. A member of the United States Airforce, transferred over to the NSA, and then made an attache to the Foundation for World Harmony's Meta-Crime division. Steve was a well trained spy and government official before he was thirty. This was partially due to the fact no one really expected much experience needed for the position in the Silver Age but that changed with the rise of the Iron Age. Steve was hostile to Metamen and vigilantes both. Mostly because they seemed to hold themselves above humans and he was not a man to be held down by any genetic freak of natures' belief that he wasn't good enough.

The White House coup ended any pretensions that the vigilantes of the Iron Age were anything but criminals in Steven's mind. Coordinating America's defense, Steve shot down several of Ramses II's futuristic craft using captured Tsavong fighters. When grounded by enemy fire, Steve managed to rescue the President by getting into fisticuffs with the AmeriNazi. Steve spent two weeks in a coma but the other guy didn't walk away at all. It was his heroic defense of the nation that got him chosen for being the new Steel Commando.

Personally, Steven was ambivalent at first about his position. Being amongst a bunch of caped glory hogs was not his idea of a plum assignment. Nevertheless, the Patriots gradually won his respect by being a contrast to every stereotype he had of the Iron Age's champions. In fact, he found himself with Black Wing as the occasional voice for using lethal force against opponents or extreme measures (the fact that both of them are 'regular humans' might have contributed to this).

Since that time, Steve has come to love and respect his fellow superheroes and become an inspiration to an entirely new generation of young Americans. Several times, he's even defied his bosses in Washington to do the right thing. A court martial offense he's been let off of because, frankly, the Bush Administration needed all the good publicity it could get. Claiming credit for the third Steel Commando's successes was just easier than adding another scandal to their already impressive list of it. Honestly, Steve is dreading his mandatory retirement at Age 42 in about five years. While Raven Enterprises' longevity treatments means that 42 isn't what it used to be, he doesn't like the prospect of getting behind a desk (even though Dame Michelle Holmes has privately sounded him out for being her replacement).

Steve is unmarried and is also somewhat concerned about his legacy. While he has a serious relationship with Ashley Morgan, he's had other relationships and honestly isn't sure he wants to settle down with her. Steve has been married before but this ended in divorce before he became the Steel Commando. He has one young son. Josh, that is now ten years old and is unaware that Steve is his father (a choice by his mother he's very angry with).

Headquarters

The United States Aircraft Carrier, Jack Washington: The headquarters of the United States branch of the Foundation for World Harmony, the Jack Washington is an ironically named location that is where all of Steven's hyper-expensive equipment is stored. A landing pad for Seventh Heaven's shuttles is also located here.

Non-Heroic Allies

Charles "Buddy" Wilson: The mechanic for the Steel Commando suit. Charles Wilson is a former associate from the Special Forces. Charles lost his leg during the Psychotic Seven's coup attempt and has to do with a prosthesis. Charles is a source of much sage advice but there's some jealousy that he's not the Steel Commando. Charles has an odd habit of being kidnapped and presumed dead, which sends Steve on rampages of revenge.

Mary Shepherd-Jenkins: A former Air Force nurse that Steve fell in love with. They've attempted, and failed, to reignite their romance on several occasions. Mary was remarried to a secret member of the House of Serpents for much of her post-divorce period. Steve was forced to kill the Steel Cobra during one of his missions. Mary doesn't yet know that her second husband was a traitor. They have one son, named Josh.

Michelle Holmes: Boss. Mother figure. Michelle Holmes taught Steel Commando III a valuable lesson. Defiance is different from treason.

Josh Shepherd: A normal ten year old boy, who has been kidnapped by General Venom and Supreme on a couple of occasions as a favor to the late Steel Cobra. Josh Shepherd eventually grows up to be the President of the United States according to Alexander Timons.

Heroic Allies

Angel Girl: Steve is not particularly close to Angel Girl. Mostly, it has the vibe of "My best friend's Ex." He also thinks she's a little too warm and bubbly.

Ashley Morgan: The best summary for their relationship is that Steve is sure he loves Ashley Morgan but will never entirely trust her. The lingering loyalty she has to the House of Serpents will always be between them.

Athena:Steve tends to prefer Athena's leadership to Divinos. There's a little latent sexism in the fact that she can easily toss him around but he's still aware that she tends to think in fairly practical terms and he's willing to go with what works.

Crimson Wing:Miss Lee and Steve have had a relationship briefly that he's hiding from Alex. Bluntly, he tends to feel like a third wheel in their presence.

Dawn Wing II: Dawn Wing looks up to Steve like an older brother and honestly, Steve loves Dawn a bit like a replacement for his own son despite the age differences. Dawn Wing thinks that while he may not be Black Wing III when he grows up, he might be able to the fourth Steel Commando.

Divinos: Steve simultaneously admires Divinos and thinks he's one of the most naive men on the planet at times. Divinos tends to think of Steve as a measuring stick for humanity's best as it currently is. It's a nice picture but could use some improvement.

Black Wing II: Alex is Steven's best friend, despite the fact they ostensibly have little in common. The World's Smartest Man and a Air Force Brat seem a mismatched pair. Still, Alex throws the best parties and is one of the few men that Steve can look to and say "I trust this man as having humanity's best interests at heart." While the Rhodes/Tony Stark relationship is applicable, so is the Iron Man/Captain America.

Except, Steve is the loyalist and Alex is the vigilante type.

The Spirit of America: The mysterious godlike Cosmic Eternal above Athena, the Spirit of America (and possibly Liberty itself) often appears in various guises to Steven in order to advise him. Frankly, it just creeps Steven out.

Splotch: Steve tries not to treat Splotch like a goofball screw up. He usually fails.

Enemies

Count Reich II: Steven Shepherd loathes the racist, evil, psychotic Zombie and doesn't show any mercy to his myriad Neo-Nazi goons or undead hosts. Count Reich II enjoys baiting him with racial epitheths but privately fears the fact that the technological wonder has so far won nearly every one of their encounters. Steven hopes someday to find some way to put Count Reich II in the ground for good.

Emerald Dragon: Amusingly, the two have had a rather flirtatous relationship over the years. Steven Shepherd attracted to her beauty and danger while she realizing that he's more than just a man in a fancy suit. Alas, her father would never approve of him and he considers her an accessory to many murders over the years.

General Venom: The archnemesis of the new Steel Commando. He considers General Venom to be the number one threat to American security, a choice that many disagree with. Nevertheless, there is a dire and personal hatred on his part towards the General. In no small part for the Generals attempts to take his son and "raise him right" as Wilson would have wanted. Conversely, General Venom considers Steve one of the few men qualified to carry on his father's legacy. General Venom and he have faced several times and, unfortunately, Steve tends to lose these confrontations on a 2-1 ratio due to his predecessor's superior experience.

Steel Cobra: Wilson Jenkins was kicked out of the Airforce thanks to testimony given by Steven Shepherd but managed to bounce back by entering the Private Sector as a military contractor (secretly a spy for Jack Washington Junior who looked precisely for angry but intelligent men like himself). Wilson Jenkins conducted numerous terrorist assaults and high technology thefts for the House of Serpents while publicly married to Mary Shepherd. A woman he courted deliberately out of spite to his former friend.

The Steel Cobra was killed during their final battle over a stolen United States nuclear missile. The Steel Cobra suit has been recovered by the House of Serpents since then and has occasionally menaced Steven Shepherd since then. It is a better suit than his own and has even gained intelligence, once seizing control of his mind when Steven started wearing it. It contains memories and engrams of the late Wilson Jenkins. Steven is still paralyzed with guilt at times over his actions.

Supreme: Supreme is the world's most dangerous terrorist. While Steel Commando has an advantage on the physical side, Supreme's ability to have a tool for every trick that he has is something that frustrates him to no end. Privately, Steel Commando has less respect and more hatred for Supreme than General Venom. Steven understands that Jack Washington may be a paranoid lunatic that needs treatment. Supreme, on the other hand, is just evil.
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Postby Psistrike » Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:30 pm

Great work, both of you. Can't wait to read more of this amalgam setting. Especially like the fact that many heroes aren't perfect, prone to mistakes.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Wed Dec 31, 2008 5:03 am

Psistrike wrote:Great work, both of you. Can't wait to read more of this amalgam setting. Especially like the fact that many heroes aren't perfect, prone to mistakes.


Yeah, it was my thesis statement for designing the setting. I wanted the heroes to be genuinely heroic but flawed, like Marvel's original idea for Spiderman and Hulk and Tony Stark was. I also wanted the villains to have achieved victories as often as their defeats.

Thus, HED! is a world filled with villains with their own countries and massive wealth/power. There's also a lot of dead heroes in the past.
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Postby dirkgentry2000 » Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:42 am

If you're not including these expanded bios in HED 1.5, - you might consider posting them on the Phipps Studio webpage as a free "Web Enhancement" - - this is good stuff that fleshes out your universe nicely.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:50 am

dirkgentry2000 wrote:If you're not including these expanded bios in HED 1.5, - you might consider posting them on the Phipps Studio webpage as a free "Web Enhancement" - - this is good stuff that fleshes out your universe nicely.


Interesting suggestion. Thanks.

So what's your take of Steel, Dirk? I'd be interested in whose your favorite Good Guys and Bad Guys.
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Postby Libra » Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:21 am

Thank you for posting the profile of Steel Commando III Charles. :D

Thus, HED! is a world filled with villains with their own countries and massive wealth/power. There's also a lot of dead heroes in the past.


No doubt not a few dead villains as well - and not all done in by the heroes' hands.

Great work, both of you. Can't wait to read more of this amalgam setting.


We aim to please, faithful followers, and I plan to continue posting as best I can - although not always in this thread. More on that anon.

One last thing: I would be interested in hearing what the readers' - and Charles' - favourite and least favourite articles are.

What do you like, what do you dislike and what would you like to see?

(I may not answer requests immediately or use your suggestions as you may imagine them, but they're quite often grist for the mill. :wink: )

As far as I am concerned my favourite articles on the thread so far are Charles' Hero and Villain profiles. I can't quite get a grip on certain characters and these help me tremendously with my writings.

I hope that you keep them going, sir. :)

(At the moment I'm particularly confused by Ashley Morgan. I imagine her as occupying much the same role as Lady Midnight in the old HED! Story Hour thread: Only sane woman, but excessively political.

When - If! - you have the time Charles, could you please write an article on her?)
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Postby Charles Phipps » Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:31 am

Ashley Morgan is, essentially, the American version of the Black Widow. Basically, she serves as the sexy Spy character whose loyalties are not entirely certain due to her past involvement with terrorists (however unwittingly).

She even has a thick accent, except its Texan. :)

But yes, she's an updated version of Lady Midnight. I'll try and do her next.
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Postby Charles Phipps » Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:41 am

Libra wrote:One last thing: I would be interested in hearing what the readers' - and Charles' - favourite and least favourite articles are.


On your end, it's really hard to beat your depiction of the Golden Age. That was just absolutely beautiful and really something I may have to ask you to do sections for a Book for HED! on sometime (assuming HED! in its new incarnation actually takes off). Really brilliant and well done material.

You seemed to be a little off trying to reconcile Freedom City's Iron Age with the Silver Age around it so honestly, I encourage you to just match the linelines up and go wild. It's easier that way in a merged universe.

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Libra wrote:As far as I am concerned my favourite articles on the thread so far are Charles' Hero and Villain profiles. I can't quite get a grip on certain characters and these help me tremendously with my writings.


Thank you. The reason I'm not going to do them as anything but web supplements is mostly, I doubt that most fans want to get that minute into NPCs lives. But it's a great suggestion by Dirkgentry and I may post cleaned up and edited versions for the website when it's up.
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Postby Libra » Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:52 am

But yes, she's an updated version of Lady Midnight. I'll try and do her next.


Thank you. :)

On your end, it's really hard to beat your depiction of the Golden Age. That was just absolutely beautiful and really something I may have to ask you to do sections for a Book for HED! on sometime (assuming HED! in its new incarnation actually takes off). Really brilliant and well done material.


Thank you again! I'd be happy to help however I can.

You seemed to be a little off trying to reconcile Freedom City's Iron Age with the Silver Age around it so honestly, I encourage you to just match the linelines up and go wild. It's easier that way in a merged universe.


I'll see what I can do. :)

But it's a great suggestion by Dirkgentry and I may post cleaned up and edited versions for the website when it's up.


If you like I can edit those you've already posted myself? :D
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