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Femme Fatale wrote:OK, I have a story, but I think it may be too dark. I just kept writing and writing and writing and it became what it is right now. Do you want to look at it EPIC?


Femme Fatale wrote:OK, I have a story, but I think it may be too dark. I just kept writing and writing and writing and it became what it is right now. Do you want to look at it EPIC?


flynnarrel wrote:Omega Girl wrote:A telekinetic would be a good niche.
Magna would be a little infringed on. Her power is moving metal around and using metal to move other things around.




Femme Fatale wrote:A big thank you to Hound who took my awfully dark story and work some magic on it! Now all I need are physical stats and a picture. Also, I'm 3 points under. Any suggestions?




Lilith
Character Name: Demetria Vance
Description:
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5”
Weight: 110lbs
Eyes: Glowing Green
Hair: Black
PL 10
Abilities 16 PP
STR: 0
STA: 0(4)
AGL: 0
DEX: 0
FGT: 0
INT: 2
AWE: 3
PRE: 3(10)
Initiative: +4
Melee Attack: +10 Strike with Claws +10 Weaken with Kiss
Range Attack: +10 Fire Breath
Defenses 20 PP
Saves: Toughness +4 Fortitude +6, Dodge +6, Parry +6, Will +9
Skills 26 PP
Deception: 10+10=20
Expertise (occult lore): 2+8=10
Insight: 3+7=10
Perception: 3+7=10
Persuasion: 10+10=20
Sleight of Hand: 0+10=10
Powers 82
Affliction 10: (resisted by will, dazed, compelled, controlled, Extras: Area [Perception (auditory)], Cumulative, Selective Attack, Flaws: Limited [Must understand language]) (42PP)
AP: "Succubus Kiss" Weaken 10: Drains Stamina(Life Force), Alternate Save [Fortitude], Insidious, Subtle 2, Progressive, Quirk: Must kiss the target, the target must be willing to be kissed, or forced to kiss by Affliction Degree 2 or 3
AP: "Fire Breath" Fire Blast Cone 10: range 250ft, DC 25, accurate 5, 60ft cone attack. Precise
AP: "Piercing Nails" Strike 10: DC 25, Close Attack +10, Penetrating 10, Custom: Nails grow and retract at will.
Morph 1: May look like her normal human self when using morph. (3PP)
Quirk 1: While Morphed she loses her ability to fly.
Quirk 1: If in combat or emotionally stressed, must make a Will check (decided by GM depending on situation) if she can maintain the power, else returning to her default demonic look.
Enhanced Presence 7 (14PP)
Enhanced Stamina 4 (8PP)
Flight 3: Flaws: Wings, 250 ft/rnd, 16mph (3PP)
Immunity 12: Aging, life support, Sleeping (12PP)
Feats: 6 PP
Attractive 2
Daze (deception)
Fascinate (persuasion)
Improved Initiative
Taunt
Complications:
Demon - She is tainted with demonic energy, being on holy land is painful.
Distinctive Smell - She emits a sweet intoxicating smell which causes men and women alike to be attracted to her. (This is explained by her Attractive 2 Advantage)
Evil Feels Good - Her soul has been tainted and evil deeds are pleasurable.
History:
Demetria Vance grew up with very little friends, she was awkward, reserved, and enjoyed reading books. She wore thick rimmed plain brown glasses, simple boring Wal-mart clothing, and did nothing with her hair. Demetria was as boring and plain as a young girl could be, which sadly meant she became the target of ridicule for being different.
When it came time to enter middle school, Demetria decided to make a change in to her appearance to try and change her life. She ditched her book worm glasses, trading them in for coloured contacts. She cut he plain unstyled hair short, and dyed it purple. She began dressing in gothic clothes which she bought from hot topic.
With her knew look and a new environment she was able to make friends surprisingly easily. She began hanging out with other gothic teenagers, for the first time Demetria had friends and she liked it. To keep her friends, she began doing things she never thought herself capable of. Shoplifting, skipping class, and vandalism quickly became a way of life for her. Inside Demetria knew what she was doing was wrong, but having friends made her so happy.
After a few months of being around her new friends, she received an invitation to a party. A boy girl party. Her first party where the boys and girls would be alone in a basement without adult supervision. Demetria was so excited she could hardly sleep the night before the party.
Yet the party was not what Demetria expected, to her great surprise the part was actually a demon summoning ritual. It seemed that her friends were all deeply absorbed in the occult, and they wanted to share their dark world with their new friend. Eager to impress her friend, Demetria join in the ritual.
Normally the group got together, drank some fake movie blood, burned incense, each member of the circle pricked their finger and smeared blood upon a voodoo like doll, placed it in the centre of the magic circle and pretended like they were truly summoning a devil to grant unto them all the powers they desire, but tonight as different. Maybe it was adding Demetria to the circle, maybe one of the other teens replaced the movie blood with real blood, or brought a real magic book but for the first time, their demon summoning actually worked.
To their great horror a massive red skinned demon appeared before them. The creature was so tall his head scrapped the ceiling, his eyes were black as night, on his back were two giant bat like wings and his nails were long and deadly. The creature was built like a brick house, and drooled with delight as it stared at the teenagers before it. With out warning it tore into the nearest boy, ripping him limb from limb in seconds.
The teenagers screamed in horror, some ran for the stairs but the creature was fast for his size and cut them off killing more. They began to panic, screaming for their parents, some even soiled themselves. The demon didn't care, it slaughtered the teens.
Something in the back of Demetria's mind told her to burn the doll with their blood on it. Despite her great fear she dashed to the doll, and used the incense lighter to set it aflame. The creature roared in pain, and lunged at Demetria, slashing her across her back, just as the demon disappeared in puff of smoke, coinciding with the doll going up completely in flames. Demetria passed out, bleeding profusely. She awoke in the hospital a few days later, the police informed her she was the only survivor of the massacre.
Knowing she would be thought crazy, she kept quiet about the demon, and told them a crazy man broke in. The police believed her story, the way the other children were ripped a part, no teenage girl could possibly do that alone.
A few days later she was released from the hospital, on her way home the world froze. Time literally stood still. No one else was moving, only Demetria was unaffected. The Demon from the party appeared before Demetria in a wave of fire. Demetria tried to scream and run, but found she had no voice, and was glued to the ground.
"Relax." The Demon said in a weird British like accent. The creature snapped his fingers and suddenly he was more human like, his skin was still red, and his eyes were still black, but his massive horns were tiny little bumps on his bald head, his wings were gone, and his claws shrunk. He now stood before her wearing a black business suit with a red dress shirt and black tie. The Demon walked towards Demetria and smiled.
"That was smart of you, burning the doll. But not fast enough, I scratched you, I infected you." He chuckled, "Before I was dismissed I infused you with some of my powers. You and I are now joined for all eternity. I can't chat with you for long so I must make this quick."
The demon snapped his fingers again, and Demetria's clothes and skin began to burn away, revealing below her new body. Her own skin was the same red as the demon, she had small bat like wings, large enough to support her, her chubby little body was now sleek, and curved in all the right ways. Her bust increased, her waist had shrunk, she had the body of a photoshopped super model.
"I have infected your soul, doing evil will be the greatest pleasure you have ever known, nothing will compare to it. You will grow strong, powerful, and one day when the evil has taken over, you will summon me again into this world, and together we will destroy every human alive." The demon smiled sadistically, "Its only a matter of time till you give in your lust for evil."
With that the demon was gone, Demetria was her normal human self, her clothes were fine. Had she gone mad? Was it all a dream? She raced home, and locked herself in her room. Alone, she stripped and examined herself. She closed her eyes and gave a shout for joy, but when she opened her eyes, she screamed with terror. She had transformed into her new demon body.
Over the next couple of weeks Demetria trained to control her new powers, so she would transform only when she wanted. She vowed she would not turn evil, she would be good, use her powers for good. She would be an angel in demon's clothing. She choose the name Lilith, a fitting name, to be her super hero handle and left home so not to drag her parents into her crazy, so she could learn to properly control her new demonic impulses for evil.








Nineofspades wrote:Ya, the skrull idea dosn't seem to be coming together. Its just way to expensive. I hadn't even finished with the powers and was already over 100 points. So, for the moment, I'm a bit short on ideas.

